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A Creative Miscellany (including stuff retrieved from our previous abode)

on Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:25 pm
The following were lifted from our old home just before it was wiped. Starting with some poetic stuff by FakeFreef:

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my stuuff is grate
like jailbait
like spam ina can
wamm bambam

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all da roun hols
at da gollf corse
owt jummp da mols
wit a bigg fat orse


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Re: A Creative Miscellany (including stuff retrieved from our previous abode)

on Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:31 pm
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I first posted this review of Ms Mod's musical Surf's Up! on August 31st, 2010:


I have read the script of Surf's Up! several times now and my love of it and sense of involvement, while there from the beginning, have grown with each fresh read. More importantly perhaps, so has my faith in its potential for staging. As it is, the characters, which are modelled on the Beach Boys in name more than anything else, jump off the printed page at you.

At the centre of the plot are six friends. Most of them love surfing, although two prefer to play cribbage. One is a little on the short side. Two are into motorized vehicles, including the Woodie that chugs onstage from time to time. And the ladies' man of the group has just learned he's been drafted into military service. So this will be their last real summer together on their beach somewhere in Southern California.

Their cameraderie, and the warmth of feeling which comes at you in waves, will make you wish it were your beach too. Even the villain of the piece, the switchblade-toting leader of a motorcycle gang, turns out to have a redeeming feature.

The setting throughout is an expanse of real sand bookended by two bars run by surly guys with good hearts. As for the music, the Beach Boys' wonderful songs weave their way effortlessly through the plot as if they'd been written specially for the occasion.

Both romantic subplots end on a positive note: Rhonda saves her less-than-tall admirer from an impossible marriage, and Wendy helps right what went wrong between her and the group's car mechanic and premier surfer.

Is there anything in it I would criticize? Let's leave that to the two non-speaking characters in the show, a voluptuous cardboard cutout advertising chow and a nerd.

You will laugh like hell at times, at others you may find a tear welling. Indeed, I defy you to stay entirely dry-eyed during the dream sequence. As the Brian character puts it, "Even though I'm losing at cribbage"----he loses every game----"I feel really good." Which one suspects is what the audience will feel as they leave the theatre at evening's end.

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Re: A Creative Miscellany (including stuff retrieved from our previous abode)

on Sun Feb 18, 2018 1:20 pm
This is new...

While contemplating the idea of a palindrome using the names of the days, I was reminded of the Shirelles song "I Met Him On A Sunday" (whose backing vocals were the inspiration for those of "In The Parkin' Lot"). It's a little messy, thanks in part to the awkward-to-reverse "day" occurring seven times (four ads, two dryads and one hamadryad, lol):  
 

Dryad: Nu-SF on a Monday, met on an Ira Friday (R'dam, aha). Saturday ads (E.U.), Troy ads end. Eww, Oleta---Lulu won Shirelles a dryad Sr. ("Uh, Thursday Rd."). A seller: "I, H. Snow, ululate low." Wednesday or Tuesday ad? Rut as a hamadryad! I, R. Farina, note my ad: "No man of Sunday Rd.."

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